Introductory Paragraph: Hook,Thesis, and Supporting Ideas


      When my brother died in a motor vehicle accident during my freshman year in high school, my single mom and I assumed the responsibility of raising his orphaned 1-year old son. The gladly assumed responsibility changed my daily activities, perceptions, and career goals. It caused me to alter my typical after school activities, develop a deep appreciation for my mom, and acquire the desire to become a preschool teacher.

Hook, Thesis, and Supporting Ideas

In this activity, you will be asked to reflect on the different parts of the following introductory paragraph: